Vision Thing
Vision has a look here dance naked quality
While some vision has "you kids aren't going to want to see that" finger wag
Other vision says beyond THIS, there's a sweet valley we have not yet tasted
As another vision rocks in its arms dreams of freedom, rebirth and transcendence.
That vision thing tangles with this vision thing into a tumbleweed of vision rings to a roll across vast vision-less fields
and sings. Yes, she sings.
She does.
Many eyes tied to many hearts, that one love ( yes, yes - that one )
that tumbleweed of desperate dreams
sing that, vision thing
You're a bundle of better angels, a choir of thorns with wings.
That last line is incredible. I can't stop reading it, and it actually does ring rather deep with me. There's a beauty and encouragement wrapped up in this poem. Really lovely.
ReplyDeleteI'd say if you're looking to break out of the list format, try some other prompts. I can link you to a few blogs that post them if you're interested.
INDEED....INSPIRE ME!
ReplyDeleteHere are a few blogs where you can find prompts:
ReplyDeletehttp://nicolehomer.tumblr.com/
http://www.tiffanychaney.com/napowrimopoetryprompts.htm
http://donnalsadd.wordpress.com/2013/03/31/aprilprompts-the-prompt-list/
Fantastic. Any really interesting people I should follow?
ReplyDeleteJessica McHugh (http://mcnito.blogspot.com/) has a very interesting thought process, haha. Her writing is all over the place crazy.
DeleteFor a more subdued reading experience, I'd recommend Lizzydragon (http://pieces-of-a-smashed-love.blogspot.com/). Her poetry is quite contemplative and her imagery is fantastic.
"that tumbleweed of desperate dreams
ReplyDeletesing that, vision thing
You're a bundle of better angels, a choir of thorns with wings."
WOW!
I could hear you reading it, it feels like you are speaking directly to me.
I'd love to hear you read this one, on video.
This is addictive.